tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186393963114287486.post7727713941702690382..comments2023-10-31T04:29:11.884-07:00Comments on प्राजु: परिणिता..Praajuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13924476936328441823noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186393963114287486.post-30237682421677591122009-08-14T09:26:00.752-07:002009-08-14T09:26:00.752-07:00Mast....sundar ahe.....
keep it up....
Amachayawar...Mast....sundar ahe.....<br />keep it up....<br />Amachayawar asech kavitecha paus padat raha....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02163504528391614625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186393963114287486.post-23184616752640101722009-08-09T23:17:21.554-07:002009-08-09T23:17:21.554-07:00koradi dharani,
korade man,
nishparna lata-veli,
s...koradi dharani,<br />korade man,<br />nishparna lata-veli,<br />shushk zaalese jivan !!!<br /><br />kuthe gela to shraavan <br />kaadhaayachi fakt tyaachi aathvan!<br />rang hiravaa udun gela !!<br />Shraavan chudaa zadun gelaa !!<br /><br />paachola- paachola <br />hindola- hindolaa<br />upeksheche kshitiz an<br />vanavaa manatalaa !!<br /><br />Dear,<br />your poems are good and creative but the situation here is very horryfying and draughtlike. <br />Ashyaa situation madhe, kavitaa (kitihi sundar aslali) aswaad ghene jad jaate. <br /><br />sameer velankarsameerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02096095545288915402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9186393963114287486.post-71282251410312496902009-08-09T14:39:04.822-07:002009-08-09T14:39:04.822-07:00छान आहे कविता...
शाळेच्या दिवसांमधली "गडद न...छान आहे कविता... <br /><br />शाळेच्या दिवसांमधली "गडद निळे गडद निळे जलद भरुनी आले" कवितेची आठवण झाली...Satish Gawdehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06225517106715855367noreply@blogger.com